It was a sad day, the air was moist and grey, an old house lay among the grass
Isolated from others, the house had dull grey walls with paint hanging lifelessly of the sides and a chimney which looked as though it had not been used in years,
There was a river by the house which was grey and polluted, this really was a sad sad place...
Great descriptive language Nick. I love out of everything to choose you choose isolation it's a great story.
ReplyDeleteHey Nick! This piece of writing has so much potential and is great! It's a bit short, maybe you could make it into a story. Who knows, maybe one day it could become published and become a bestselling book.
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